Monday, March 18, 2013

Poem Response 22

I wandered lonely as a cloud
William Wordsworth

I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
A poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed---and gazed---but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:

For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.


The imagery in this poem is fantastic. He so easily paints the picture of a field of daffodils dancing. I love that word. “dancing”. It’s a perfect word for poems to hold within the lines of their beings. It’s synonymous with “elegant movement”, “graceful waves” or, “gentle breathes of motion”. It captures… everything! And I love to use it to bring to life words that would normally be left stationary on the page.
Words can so easily be dead on the page. To make them more than words, sentences, phrases and lifeless ideas, you need something to bring them to life! Words like “dancing” add that something extra special. The words come alive, and fill the mind of the person whose path has crossed that of the distant author’s.

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